[Skald]

Death, a threshold to another life, but life can
transcend the mortal coul.
With the death of osiris- benevolent lord of egypt,
a curse befell on the land, Egypt became a waste,
for thousands of years he was trapped in the tomb
of his condemn.
I, high priest, servant of ramses,was sent to find Isis's obelisk
of life, it's finally before my eyes, in beauty shines
as the lady herself. There an engraved prophecy-
when the kingdom shall be united and the scroll of life be found,
Isis shall ressurect her beloved...
Great lord! the scroll was laid in your temple.
Mighty king! your kingdom awaits..!

follow the signs of this storm,
chant of Isis, heard before she comes,
through cracks in cloud walls shall
glance the sun down at the earth,
seven colors and notes,
invoked to our soul, shall create melodies,
and the path that enscribed by her,
reavealed for us shall be...

queen of vipers, or lady of dawn?
by many names she had been known,
but "pure love" this is the one,
now rings as her voice, as her majestic tone!

At last..!
hades were opened, unleash the power...!

Your wisdom flows in the waters of endless springs,
Obelisks tell us of your myths, oh father king!
only mortals can scribe gods fate...
Return father, from hades! arise mighty king, glory awaits!

With your scarab of power i called it's last sunset,
I am no saviour, but i can't turn back,
from now your scarab is the weapon i wield,
faith flaming inside, protects like a shield...
The ressurection shall be performed at dawn,
don't bind my soul, i shall serve by my own,
death is only a threshold to another life,
spread the wealth Osiris, with you we shall die!

Your wisdom flows in the waters of endless springs,
Obelisks tell us of your myths, oh father king!
only mortals can scribe gods fate...
Return father, from hades! arise mighty king, bloodshed awaits!

[Avi Rabinovich]

а что явилось источником вдохновления?

[Skald]

если честно то даже не знаю, все время в етом стиле пишу, мифы очень люблю.

[Avi Rabinovich]

Врядли тебя в этом форуме оценят...

[Ammalgamma]

Оценит тот, кто в хорошо знает английский. Я в нём не силён, потому не оценю. Если есть ещё, уважаемый автор, печатайте пожалуйста! У нас англоязычной поэзии мало. Только будте любезны, тему назовите своим именем (псевдонимом), если решите продолжить публикации.
А вы, сэр Ави, всё ищите с кем бы против меня подружить?

[Avi Rabinovich]

Хоть вы и понаписывали немало гадостей Амальгамма я не ищу ссор ни с кем,представляете?
п.с. мне кажется вам трудно представить...
п.п.с. выучите уж английский что ли,а впрочем может и не надо...
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