[Dark]

Я долго искал, написано ли где-либо в правилах об официальном языке данного форума. После чего наткнулся на замечательные стихи юзерши под ником Тат на английском языке. Из этого был извлечён вывод, что по-английски писать можно. Поэтому вот.

A Sonnet.

When sombre clouds crowd above your head,
And distant thunder hints that storm is near,
Just close your eyes and try to think instead
Of jolly rainbow that will soon appear.

When melancholy gnaws you from inside,
It makes you numb, you don't know what to do.
Don't run away, don't seek a place to hide,
'Cause you have friends who will be there for you.

And if you think that you've been left alone,
Forlorn, forsaken and the love is far,
Your only solace is to look around
And realize how deeply wrong you are.

When you feel cold, just come and hold my hand,
Absorb my warmth and all your grief will end...

[Dark]

Beast.

There is a beast inside of me,
A dark and mighty force,
I feel its claws of ice-cold steel,
No mercy, no remorse...

It wants no flesh, nor blood, nor bone,
It wants my soul instead,
It hunts my fears when I'm alone,
My sorrow, when I'm sad...

It drinks my pain when I am hurt,
When feelings fade away,
When people that I used to trust
So suddenly betray...

My grief and anger feed its strength,
Hypocrisy and lies,
There is a beast inside of me,
Awaiting my demise...

[Dark]

Для контраста. Нечто коротенькое и забавное.

Limerick.

One fair lady was feeling so blue,
Fell in love and didn't know what to do.
She one day wrote an ode
To the man she adored,
But the censorship wouldn't let it through.

[Lemur]

Лимерик жжет! :)
А если серьезно, то покритиковать не получится - владение языком недостаточное. Чувствуется, что размер и рифма имеются. А вот в плане содержания - х.з.

[Benz]

[Dark]

A neverending illusion,
The ground burns beneath your feet.
No remorse, no confusion,
There’s a task you must complete.
Clear of needless emotions
Pride and fury in your eyes,
Lies are taken for granted,
You are ready to sacrifice…

You may seek for redemption
With blood of children on your hands.
The sacred books that you worship
You will never understand.
You do what they tell you,
Put your head inside the noose.
Blind faith is your weapon,
There is nothing left to lose.

Do you see in your nightmares
All the sinners that you have killed?
Can you hear their voices?
All the world is the battlefield…
You are pulling the trigger,
One moment – your pain is past…
Just look into my eyes
Two seconds before the blast…

Look at me! Can you see me?
I’m not here any more!
Talk to me! Tell me one thing…
Have you won the war?

[master of puppets]

бля по РУССКИ!!!!
че воще, опизденели??

предупреждение. оставьте это модераторам.

[Ебурашка]

[master of puppets]

нахуй твоя жопа хороша, ебураш
предупреждение.

[Dark]

Мастер, в правилах этого форума нет пункта, ограничивающего выбор языка. К тому же я не первый, кто пишет тут по-английски. Кто понимает, тот оценит. Кто не понимает, тот пусть выучит и тоже оценит. А вот хамить не надо. Для здоровья вредно.